Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they case doubt on specific points made in the reading passage. TPO 11
The article states that young people are reading less literature like novels, plays, and poems which affects the culture and future of the literature and provides three reasons for support. However, the professor explains that it doesn't affect and refutes each of the author's reasons.
To begin with, the reading states that people are not reading literature so they can not develop intellectual stimulation like exercise our imaginations, empathize with others and expand our understanding of language. On the other hand, the lecturer contradicts these points by stating that there are other books like science, history, and politics which are a good source to provide intellectual stimulation. Those books are of high quality and they also provide readers to stimulate their imaginations.
Moreover, the passage states that people are spending more time on the television, watch a music video, or read a Web page, this has lowered the level of culture. Nonetheless, the speaker says that watch a good movie and listening to music don't affect the culture. There are many forms to express our culture. Good movies and music are some of the forms of culture.
last, the reading contends that because of the lack of an audience publisher are not interested to invest in literature. The instructor cast doubt on this theory, she says that it is true, there is less reader's but it is also due to the author. Because they use very complicates writing styles that it is hard for readers to understand.
- Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they case doubt on specific points made in the reading passage. 3
- TPO 23 integrated wreitting 75
- TPO 15 integrated essay 75
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: doesn't
...However, the professor explains that it doesnt affect and refutes each of the authors ...
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Suggestion: don't
...tch a good movie and listening to music dont affect the culture. There are many form...
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Suggestion: some
... our culture. Good movies and music are some of the forms of culture. last, the readin...
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Suggestion: Last
... are some of the forms of culture. last, the reading contends that because of t...
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Line 13, column 190, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are less readers'?
Suggestion: there are less readers
... this theory, she says that it is true, there is less readers but it is also due to the author. Becau...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun readers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ory, she says that it is true, there is less readers but it is also due to the autho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, nonetheless, so, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 247.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11740890688 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64537647341 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558704453441 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7564503692 49.2860985944 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06452816374 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390856337541 0.272083759551 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121380289311 0.0996497079465 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117522104208 0.0662205650399 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210036450967 0.162205337803 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503103463952 0.0443174109184 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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