The reading and lecturer are about the dinosaures if they wer considerd as endotherms enamel or not .The endotherms are type of animals which can maintain its internal tempreture warmer than surrounding environment.The the author states that the dinosaurs are endotherms.The lucturer cases doubt on the claim made in the article.She says that the dinosaures were not endotherms.
First, the author says that the dinosuar fossils were found in polar region and these region are very cold,only endotherms enamals can live there. The lecturer rebats this argument. She says, in the past these regions were warmer than now, also the dinosuars can immigrat to warmer area in a cold season.
Second,the author of the reading claim that the dinosaurs have legs underneath its bodyl which are used for physical activities like running . Modren endotherms have this property.This point challenged by lecturer. She says that the dinosaurs hadl a heavy weight ,The legs underneath its body to withstand its weight.
Finaly, the author believes that the dinosaurs had haversain canals and these canalds are the charesteristic feature of endotherms bones ,these canals contain nerves and blood vessels that allow the endothermal animals to grow up quickly.The lecturer in the other hand, stats that the dinosaurs have growth rings in its bones . She elaborates on this by mentioning that the dinosaurs growth op rapidly in specific times and slowly in another times. So thats why the growth rings had been formee.
The reading and lecturer are about the dinosaures if they wer considerd as endotherms enamel or not .The endotherms are type of animals which can maintain its internal tempreture warmer than surrounding environment.The the author states that the dinosaurs are endotherms.The lucturer cases doubt on the claim made in the article.She says that the dinosaures were not endotherms.
First, the author says that the dinosuar fossils were found in polar region and these region are very cold,only endotherms enamals can live there. The lecturer rebats this argument. She says, in the past these regions were warmer than now, also the dinosuars can immigrat to warmer area in a cold season.
Second,the author of the reading claim that the dinosaurs have legs underneath its bodyl which are used for physical activities like running . Modren endotherms have this property.This point challenged by lecturer. She says that the dinosaurs hadl a heavy weight ,The legs underneath its body to withstand its weight.
Finaly, the author believes that the dinosaurs had haversain canals and these canalds are the charesteristic feature of endotherms bones ,these canals contain nerves and blood vessels that allow the endothermal animals to grow up quickly.The lecturer in the other hand, stats that the dinosaurs have growth rings in its bones . She elaborates on this by mentioning that the dinosaurs growth op rapidly in specific times and slowly in another times. So thats why the growth rings had been formee.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 239.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29288702929 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73655148632 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573221757322 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.498341001 49.2860985944 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.5 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 7.06452816374 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 4.19205298013 692% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475402988509 0.272083759551 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146467904422 0.0996497079465 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176679159529 0.0662205650399 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283602784444 0.162205337803 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.213945516308 0.0443174109184 483% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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