according to the reading passages moai is beautiful statue in this island and it attract the more number of tourist throughout the year. and reading suggests that som reason why the moai collapsed but tth same time statements are refutes by the speaker. here i want to explore the both statement one by one.
first of all, moai collapsed because of the construction method but the speaker says that construction is not causes for the destruction of the moai.
secondly, reading passages claims that all forest are destroyed due cut of all the tree to make track to move the moai but lecture explains that they moved the moai by rope with tilting moai side by side. so the moving the moai can not be the reason for the deforestation at all according the speaker.
thirdly, reading passages states that all the trees was destroyed for making the track for the moai and it's evidence by the birds migrating from that place for searching of food. but the lecturer refutes this statement by stating that the reason for deforesting is not because of the track, it's because while European travels to this place the came along with rats which more vulnerable to the trees that this island became deforested.
finally, reading passages suggests that there was 2000 people was there around 400 bc and it was reduced to the 2000 when european entered there but the speaker says that that was miss calculation because the recent carbon date suggests that those who are living in this island about 1200 ad period not before that.
to sum up, reading says that construction of moai, deforestation are causes for the decline of population un this island but this all statement entirely opposit to the speaker point of view.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'while', 'first of all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242990654206 0.261695866417 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.171339563863 0.158904122519 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0498442367601 0.0723426182421 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0342679127726 0.0435111971325 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0155763239875 0.0277247811725 56% => OK
Prepositions: 0.155763239875 0.128828473217 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0529595015576 0.0370669169778 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43595606269 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0280373831776 0.0208969081088 134% => OK
Particles: 0.00311526479751 0.00154638098197 201% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.14953271028 0.128158765124 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00311526479751 0.0158828679856 20% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0155763239875 0.0114777025283 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1749.0 1645.83664459 106% => OK
No of words: 296.0 271.125827815 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90878378378 6.08160592843 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.04852973271 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327702702703 0.374372842146 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239864864865 0.287516216867 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152027027027 0.187439937562 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0945945945946 0.113142543107 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43595606269 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483108108108 0.539623497131 90% => OK
Word variations: 47.2960875117 53.8517498576 88% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0529801325 77% => OK
Sentence length: 29.6 21.7502111507 136% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4575377282 49.3711431718 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.9 132.220823453 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 21.7502111507 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.878197800319 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 3.39072847682 678% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.5864864865 50.5018328374 106% => OK
Elegance: 2.04225352113 1.90840788429 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429255718151 0.451937469235 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.179257862099 0.142949733639 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0850359751473 0.0787303798458 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.803623275608 0.631733273073 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165434150636 0.139662658121 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.263430268779 0.21790590567 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950461557996 0.0871468918476 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.396546823577 0.414875509568 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.122681393192 0.0530846634433 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305710164102 0.332364718235 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909917636347 0.0446026805963 204% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.62251655629 166% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
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Rates: 66.8666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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