Some people think saving money is good,others think that spending money is a better to enjoy life.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
There is a perennial dilemma between taking pleasure from money and putting it in savings accounts at the banks. I think there is convincing reasons to suggest that spending money should be done carefully and economically, because in today's world, unexpected happenings are a matter of concern for many people. In this essay both aspects of will be elaborated.
First of all, it is widely believed that people earn money to enjoy their lives. Indeed, lifetime is limited for every one that is why they should not postpone having fun for an other time but they have to be thoughtful not to be in debt.
On the other hand, one of the strongest argument for saving money is that people have to make a plan for their expenses like travel, education, housing and clothes. From my experience, I try to save more money to support my education expenses like books, tuitions and commuting. However, My parents are supportive and from time to time give me some money but I really want to be independent.
finally, there is no doubt that we should be ready to pay unpredictable expenditure like getting sick and having an accident which are experienced by every one. For example, once my knee was broken and I had to have surgery on my knee but unfortunately I didn't have enough money and I had to borrow some money from my friend that I deeply would not like to do.
In conclusion, From my point of view, as people say that save money for a rainy day, it is absolutely right to say that saving money is the best way to be prepared for the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, really, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55035971223 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55123220761 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546762589928 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2824601302 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 21.698381199 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06452816374 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204123493181 0.272083759551 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862184683637 0.0996497079465 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505014958608 0.0662205650399 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121245272289 0.162205337803 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429010314407 0.0443174109184 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.2367328918 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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