Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific theories presented in the reading passage.
The reading claims that there are some theories about how agnosites, which were a group of marine animals that died out, may have lived . However, the lecturer finds all the ideas dubious and presents some evidence to refute them all.
the author argues that the agnosite may have been predators. On the contrary, the lecturer brings up the idea that the anthropods actually have large eyes which help them detect their preys, but the agnostids had tiny eyes. We can say that they were nearly blind; therefore, they cannot be predators. If they considered to be predators, they may have used other senses, although this idea has not seen in fossils.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that they may have inhabited on the seafloor. In contrast, the professor underlines the fact that the seafloor dwellers have not the ability to move fast and far distances. They move slowly and stay in localized area, but we discoveried fossils of agnostides dispersed in large distances which suggested that they could move readily long distances, and this ability is unusual in seafloor dwellers.
Finally, the reading asserts that they were parasite. Conversely, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that the population of parasites are not very large, because if the size of them becomes very large, it will kill the host organisim. But, according to fossils, the population of agnosites were large because there were species scattered in a vast number of areas.
- Some teenagers take part in different kinds of activities such as musical classes, sport classes and so on, but others only focus on one activity which is important to them. Which idea do you support? 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smart phones, video games for fun and entertainment. Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for children’s dev 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smart phones, video games for fun and entertainment. Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for children’s dev 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One quality that a successful leader must have is the ability to make decisions quickly. When leaders take too much time to make decisions, they will be seen as ineffective by the people they lead. 71
- Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific theories presented in the reading passage. 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, conversely, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 245.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06530612245 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48491050612 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0174275184 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.416666667 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06452816374 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127648172249 0.272083759551 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523378404344 0.0996497079465 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502231537572 0.0662205650399 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744606220812 0.162205337803 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253501265198 0.0443174109184 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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