Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage
The reading and lecture are both about the deforestation which is cutting down the trees.The author of the reading states the benefit of deforestation as it has created more farmland and livestock.The lecturer disagrees.He mentions, by this activity,humans have put the ecosystem in danger and attacks each of the claim made in the article.
The author of the reading begins by stating ,population is increasing and clearing forest has created more space for farming which provides enough food for every single citizen.The professor believes, there are flaws in the writer’s position.He contends although it provides space to live in,destroying rainforest to satisfy people’s need should not be our concern.Instead, we should adopt alternatives like hydroponics which require no soil to grow crop. He goes on to say that we should avoid the traditional practice of farming.
According to the article,deforestation creates new residential area for people.It says demanding space to live benefit regional economy as it allows investors to buy land ,build homes which eventually let people to live,work and thrive. The speaker on other hand points out that 20% of the world’s oxygen are produce from rainforest.In addition,it is the home for many species of plant,animals and insects.So, making money and economic prosperity for short term should not be our priority.
Also,the reading passage notes that forestry industry is our national economy.Countries like brazil,Thailand etc are highly depend on deforestation as it creates job opportunity for many people.Moreover, the world demand for paper,lumber and furniture can be fulfilled from this. The lecturer rebuts this argument.He says these all are developing countries and employs worker in low wages.Thus,this only benefits the small group organization rather than the employee.
As you can see,the writer and speaker hold very different views on pros of deforestation,the lecturer effectively challenges the claim made in the article.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities as they give to their university libraries Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 83
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage 3
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team than to work independently 70
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 302.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63907284768 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40943367321 2.5805825403 132% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 145.348785872 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 419.366225166 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 21.2450331126 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.786653902 49.2860985944 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.875 110.228320801 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.75 21.698381199 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06452816374 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 4.19205298013 692% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114145608372 0.272083759551 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466716977333 0.0996497079465 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385653785104 0.0662205650399 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655916754234 0.162205337803 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032179482915 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.3589403974 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 53.8541721854 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.0289183223 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.2367328918 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.42419426049 121% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 63.6247240618 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.7273730684 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.498013245 160% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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