Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage
The reading and lecture are both about the online degree which are now widely available all over the world. The author of the reading states that although online courses are identical to traditional courses to some extent there is few distinction between them. The lecturer disagrees. He mentions that both of them offers the same courses nevertheless online courses are suceptible to be more convenient for students.
Firstly, the author begins by stating that on campus students can have direct interaction with teachers. They can clear their doubts instantly and not only this they can attend the meeting and conference of teacher which benefit them to flourish in academia. The professor believes there are flaws in the writer’s position. He contends that online students too can contact with lecturer however in chat, emails and telephone. Therefore, it is utterly upto to the students whether to connect or not with instructor.
Secondly, according to the passage online courses are inferior to physical courses. In addition, they are not designed complicated which eventually led students to complete course within a week. Moreover, every students can join similar course junior level students provide feedback on assignment which is not the case on campus. The speaker on other hands points out that online courses are equivalent in quality as college since the courses offered by them have to meet the requirement of same level. Additionally, online study tend to be more complex as students must feasible to manage their time, classes and technology.
Finally, the reading passage notes that masters degree cannot be obtain in online classes by top colleges. Besides, even if there is some available they requires students to complete designated program on college first. Hence, online courses seem not to be applicable for those who wants to graduate from well known college. The professor rebuts this argument. He puts forth the idea that although some of the top colleges do not offer graduate degree nonetheless there are many option available for the masters degree just as the colleges.
As we can see, the author and lecturer holds very conflicting views on online graduate degree. The speaker effectively challenges the writer’s argument.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun distinction seems to be countable; consider using: 'few distinctions'.
Suggestion: few distinctions
...itional courses to some extent there is few distinction between them. The lecturer disagrees. H...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... there is few distinction between them. The lecturer disagrees. He mentions that bo...
^^^
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the passage online courses are inferior to physical courses. In addition, they a...
^^
Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...s, even if there is some available they requires students to complete designated program...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 398, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...t. He puts forth the idea that although some of the top colleges do not offer graduate degr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1373.03311258 139% => OK
No of words: 360.0 270.72406181 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29722222222 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59639915657 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 145.348785872 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536111111111 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 419.366225166 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3381180072 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8095238095 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100945887843 0.272083759551 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326348965703 0.0996497079465 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030802944423 0.0662205650399 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550848046831 0.162205337803 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147812024409 0.0443174109184 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.8541721854 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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