In the given set of material, the author states that offering a four-day week jobs would benefit te economy as awhole as well as the individual companies and the employees lives.however,he professor in the following material casts doubts on those points made in the text by providing evidences and justifications.
first of all,the reading passage claims that The shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alert, and as a result, they would make fewer costly errors in their work.in addition, Hiring more staff to ensure that the same amount of work would be accomplished would not result in additional payroll costs because four-day employees would only be paid 80 percent of the normal rate.in contrast, the lecture refutes this point by saying that The shortened workweek would result in addition costs that lead to decrease company profits.for example,the new employees will need training and medical insurance and office spaces and computers. beside, the medical insurance for the four-day employees will not changed ,it will stay the same as they work for five-day a week. therefore ,the first point presented in the article is not valid.
moreover,the written materials says that offering this option to employees would reduce unemployment rates,in contrary, the speaker rebuts this point,he says that companies may ask the for-day employees to work over time to obtain the same amount of work or production when they were working for five days. thus , there is no additional jobs created.
finally,the writer states that a four-day workweek would be better for individual employees.the writer continues to say that more free time could improve the quality of their lives by spending the extra time with their families, pursuing private interests, or enjoying leisure activities.conversely,the professor contradicts this point by saying that more free time for employees could put them at risks.for instance , it could affect their career's stability and prevent them from getting promotions .
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...and prevent them from getting promotions .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in contrast, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 5.04856512141 357% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 319.0 270.72406181 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88966769564 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 145.348785872 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 21.2450331126 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.180723544 49.2860985944 447% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.571428571 110.228320801 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.5714285714 21.698381199 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.5714285714 7.06452816374 334% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 4.19205298013 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.650164734202 0.272083759551 239% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.25434036047 0.0996497079465 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185638312185 0.0662205650399 280% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.367858623237 0.162205337803 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140220506391 0.0443174109184 316% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.0 13.3589403974 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 53.8541721854 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.0289183223 189% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 12.2367328918 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.42419426049 123% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 63.6247240618 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.7273730684 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.498013245 191% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.2008830022 259% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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