the reading passage suggests several solutions to prevent injuries to birds when they try to fly through glass windows ,for instance , oneway glass,colorful designs and magnetic field.however,the lecturer refutes all solutions made in the article.
first,the author of the passage states that replacing the regular glass with one way glass will make the birds to understand that the glass forms a solid barrier and will not try to fly through it. on the other hand,the lecture opposes this point and explains that the one way glass will act as a mirror ,and this is a problem for the birds ,becuase birds do not understand mirrors for example the one way glass will reflect the image of sky or tree,as a result the birds will try to fly through it.
second,the aricle proposes using of colorful designs ,for example ,windos could have a design of thin stripes painted over the glass.in contrast, the professor rebuts this solution and says that painted the windows with thin stripes will not be efficient becuase the birds will see the area between the stripes as holes and then they will try to fly through it.
third,the reading states that using a kind of magnetic feild around the building will help the birds .in contrary, the listning dis agrees with this point and explains that birds used magnetic compass during long trips not during short trips for example when they fly from one part of the city to the other part of the same city ,then they will not use the magnetic compass that they have ,instead of that they will use their eyes and the light.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, so, then, third, for example, for instance, in contrast, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.4613686534 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 271.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78966789668 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28386661449 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479704797048 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 21.2450331126 254% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.7695799229 49.2860985944 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 259.6 110.228320801 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.2 21.698381199 250% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 7.06452816374 354% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.562716782402 0.272083759551 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.346895315792 0.0996497079465 348% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554953516693 0.0662205650399 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.360402949333 0.162205337803 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629484217808 0.0443174109184 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 13.3589403974 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.59 53.8541721854 62% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.0289183223 199% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.39 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.7273730684 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.498013245 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.2008830022 214% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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