The passage and the lecture both discuss the merits and dimerits of shortened work week.
fiisly,The reading asserts that by mitigating the work week not only the employers costly errors will reduce as a result of being more rested and alert, but also companies have the chance to hire more employers which can reduce unemployement rate. The lecturer refute the passage claim becuase hiring new workers in cosly so as to providing train, medical needs, more office space, and computers.
besides, the passsage hold the view that, although employers will have much more quality time to spend with their family by accepting the option to work 4 days a week, it can put their work at risk as a result of incrised eployees' expectation to do the same work by working more and more in a day and even they will lose their job as a result of reduced job abilities. Also, employees prefer 5 days working for managers and it is possible that they pass over promotions due to working less.
lastly, the reading looks into shortened work week as a chance for employees to pursue private interests and to enjoy leisure time, but the lexturere confront this point of view becuase of all above reasons which can lead to dissatisfaction of employers instead of inhancing their life quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Fiisly
...and dimerits of shortened work week. fiisly,The reading asserts that by mitigating ...
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Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
...merits of shortened work week. fiisly,The reading asserts that by mitigating the ...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'refutes'.
Suggestion: refutes
...reduce unemployement rate. The lecturer refute the passage claim becuase hiring new wo...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...aim becuase hiring new workers in cosly so as to providing train, medical needs, more of...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...s, more office space, and computers. besides, the passsage hold the view that, altho...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...over promotions due to working less. lastly, the reading looks into shortened work ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, lastly, look, so, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.4613686534 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 220.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84545454545 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48772191585 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595454545455 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 21.2450331126 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.026663112 49.2860985944 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.666666667 110.228320801 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6666666667 21.698381199 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06452816374 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317469711911 0.272083759551 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145707284532 0.0996497079465 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075114702821 0.0662205650399 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167932933865 0.162205337803 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843088340794 0.0443174109184 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.3589403974 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 53.8541721854 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.0289183223 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.498013245 156% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.2008830022 179% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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