The reading passage says, the reptile animals save their tempter of their bodies on 37 `c degree and it’s not matter the weather around them is cold or warm, because of that the dinosaurs were in reptile groups, but the new reptiles people can see in jungles and deserts are not endothermic. After that some scientists find the fossils of dinosaurs in polar areas, they find out that, they endothermic too, but the lecture says, dinosaurs couldn’t be warm enough to live in the polar places, also, they couldn’t migrate to other places, because of their bodies. They couldn’t active in that climates, and the body structure was very large size, so they couldn’t to running too much distance, such as crocodiles and lizards, they have underneath body and their leg are small, so it’s an another reason to be an endothermic.
On the other hand, it has some connection between endotherms and bone structure, their bones have the structure called Havarism. it has canals house nerves and blood vessels to help animal to grow rapidly and it’s a fact of the being in endotherms group also the fossils of the dinosaurs have it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding weather'?
Suggestion: the surrounding weather
...'c degree and it's not matter the weather around them is cold or warm, because of that the di...
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Line 1, column 819, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a reason' or 'another reason'.
Suggestion: a reason; another reason
...y and their leg are small, so it's an another reason to be an endothermic. On the other h...
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Line 1, column 843, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...l, so it's an another reason to be an endothermic. On the other hand, it has some conn...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...nes have the structure called Havarism. it has canals house nerves and blood vesse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 194.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01030927835 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6650830491 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 419.366225166 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 21.2450331126 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1615727518 49.2860985944 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 194.4 110.228320801 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8 21.698381199 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.09492273731 49% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310381293628 0.272083759551 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181549829557 0.0996497079465 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052254197513 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274096818046 0.162205337803 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499472217287 0.0443174109184 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.3589403974 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.0289183223 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 63.6247240618 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.7273730684 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.498013245 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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