The professor illustrated three point, which are in contrast to the those mentioned in the passage. There are, some people in united states, who pay attention to certified products and they will be buy them favorably, second it is not always true that in US costumers just take the price into account, and last he added companies in US which are engaged in wood industry should pay attention to the worldwide requirements.
First, he added that, despite some people never pay attention to labels, or maybe we have other labels named differently, but if they costumers in US notice about the labels like ecocertified ones, they will purchase favorably.
Secondly, he said, all the people care about the price, who doesn't . Even though we should suppose low prices will attract people, it is not always the story. Sometime when the discrepancy between two product is about 5 percent, costumers in US will take other factors into considerations. And it is the time when ecocertified products come to the points and people are eager to those ones in US.
Third, he pointed out to this fine points that if wood companies suppose that there will be no need for them to standardized themselves in worldwide criteria, since their market is in us, they are going to lose their fortune. For people in US are so eager to support the ecocertified companies and products, and after a while these companies should see their international rivals in US.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
...ll the people care about the price, who doesnt . Even though we should suppose low pri...
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... people care about the price, who doesnt . Even though we should suppose low price...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'product' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'products'.
...metime when the discrepancy between two product is about 5 percent, costumers in US wil...
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
...e to the points and people are eager to those ones in US. Third, he pointed out to this...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 245.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90204081633 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68249873402 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555102040816 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.8657242986 49.2860985944 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.444444444 110.228320801 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2222222222 21.698381199 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06452816374 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228121431914 0.272083759551 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901397494654 0.0996497079465 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701467421804 0.0662205650399 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143946741703 0.162205337803 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633548131089 0.0443174109184 143% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.