The article state that Chaevalier de Seingalt wrote a book about her adventures and some clues show that she did not write exact events. However, professor explains none of the author's reasons are convincing and refute them one by one .
First to begin with, in the article mentioned that she is not wealthy woman.because,if she was a reach woman,she would not borrow money from a merchant for gambling.As the reading claims is refuted by the professor . He assert that in Switzerland everyone tending to gamble borrow some money from others then when he/she wins the gambling he/she pays back the loan.
In addition, according to essay there are much time between conversation and writing and because of that she may not remind exact event that happened to her . Nevertheless the professor argues that she wrote everything every day .
Finally, based on the author's opinion, for making enjoyable reading she claimed that she escaped from prison with one piece of metal . On the contrary, the professor shows that she is right because her room in the prison after her escape need to be repaired.
- TPO-40 - Independent Writing Task Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school Do you think this is a good idea?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-42 - Integrated Writing Task Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture, yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds. Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air, millions of birds are harmed every year when the 76
- TPO-44 - Independent Writing Task Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing th 76
- TPO-44 - Integrated Writing Task In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to 76
- TPO-08 - Integrated Writing Task Toward the end of his life, the Chevalier de Seingalt (1725-1798) wrote a long memoir recounting his life and adventures. The Chevalier was a somewhat controversial figure, but since he met many famous people, including ki 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The article state that Chaevalier de Sei...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...re convincing and refute them one by one . First to begin with, in th...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onvincing and refute them one by one . First to begin with, in the article...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...ed that she is not wealthy woman.because,if she was a reach woman,she would not bor...
^^^
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , she
...y woman.because,if she was a reach woman,she would not borrow money from a merchant ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...rrow money from a merchant for gambling.As the reading claims is refuted by the pr...
^^
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rrow money from a merchant for gambling.As the reading claims is refuted by the pr...
^^
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ading claims is refuted by the professor . He assert that in Switzerland everyone ...
^^
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'asserts'.
Suggestion: asserts
...claims is refuted by the professor . He assert that in Switzerland everyone tending to...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... gambling he/she pays back the loan. In addition, according to essay there ar...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... remind exact event that happened to her . Nevertheless the professor argues that ...
^^
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...mind exact event that happened to her . Nevertheless the professor argues that she wrote eve...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...gues that she wrote everything every day . Finally, based on the authors o...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat she wrote everything every day . Finally, based on the authors opinion, f...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ery day . Finally, based on the authors opinion, for making enjoyable reading s...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...aped from prison with one piece of metal . On the contrary, the professor shows th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 1373.03311258 67% => OK
No of words: 183.0 270.72406181 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01092896175 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5790523191 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 419.366225166 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9904285423 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.625 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 7.06452816374 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 4.19205298013 382% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131168956291 0.272083759551 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596421821305 0.0996497079465 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334185962726 0.0662205650399 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798181198503 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331470975417 0.0443174109184 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.