TPO 37- One of the threats to endangered sea turtle species is the use of nets by commercial shrimp-fishing boats. When turtles get accidentally caught in the nets, they cannot rise to the surface of the ocean to breathe, and they die. Some people suggest
The passage states that a remarkable number of sea turtles are killed by the shrimpers annually. these turtles trap into the shrimp-boat nets and they couldn't come to the sea surface to breath. Some critics believe that an invention called turtle excluder device is not helpful for turtles to release themselves and the passage explains three reasons. However, the lecturer has an opposite notion and refutes each the reasons.
First, the article explains that turtles get caught into traps rarely and on the other hand striking number of shrimps will escaped through the ted passages. The professor challenges this reason by saying that shrimp boats are innumerable in the ocean so the aggregate number of trapped turtles will be striking. He adds that the killed turtles are noticeable in comparison to the whole population and the released shrimps by means of passages are insignificant.
Second, the passage claims that alternative methods such as time limit is more instrumental for helping the trapped turtles but the lecturer refutes this explanation as well and says that inspecting time limitation by patrols is not practical and this procedure will not be applicable.
Third, the article avers that the passages which are applied for turtles are not in proportionate with the size of big turtles. The professor contends that these passages could be designed bigger without any devastative effect on the ted efficiency.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...s are killed by the shrimpers annually. these turtles trap into the shrimp-boat nets ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...trap into the shrimp-boat nets and they couldnt come to the sea surface to breath. Some...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'escape'
Suggestion: escape
...er hand striking number of shrimps will escaped through the ted passages. The professor...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, third, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 229.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27947598253 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67136860377 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576419213974 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3284736822 49.2860985944 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.9 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06452816374 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181900393656 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793390346101 0.0996497079465 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654033665254 0.0662205650399 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10263139974 0.162205337803 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742675775918 0.0443174109184 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.