The reading passage discuss about various causes of frog population declined or extinct due to change of environment and it provide three causes of frog population declined and it's solution. The lecture cast doubt on the claims made in the article. the professor think that this solution are not effective in case of frog preservation.
First, the reading passage claim that frog harmed by pesticides that why harmful pesticide are prohibited in near sensitive frog population. That help to reduce the declination of frog. However, the listening section refute this point by saying that it is unjustice for local farmer who are prohibited from the use of pesticides. it reduce the crop production that why farmer are facing economic problem.
Secondly, the reading argued that fungus are another causes of frog declination . most of the frog are die of dehydration .it's solution is anti-fungal medication and treatments at large scale. the lecture are not support that point because it's a high costly and time consuming process. This type of treatment take long time every season every individual frog have to give antifungal medicine and they are next generation.
Finally, the reading passage stats that some time natural and man-made activity are also causes declines the frog population. Excessive use of water and wetland draining affect the frog to destroy the frog egg. However, the professor oppose this point by saying that global warming are on of the causes of water level fluctuation and excessive use of water.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nct due to change of environment and it provide three causes of frog population decline...
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...oubt on the claims made in the article. the professor think that this solution are ...
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...aims made in the article. the professor think that this solution are not effective in...
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...by pesticides that why harmful pesticide are prohibited in near sensitive frog po...
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... prohibited from the use of pesticides. it reduce the crop production that why fa...
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...ohibited from the use of pesticides. it reduce the crop production that why farmer ar...
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...esticides. it reduce the crop production that why farmer are facing economic prob...
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...e facing economic problem. Secondly, the reading argued that fungus are anoth...
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...s are another causes of frog declination . most of the frog are die of dehydration...
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...re another causes of frog declination . most of the frog are die of dehydration .its...
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...dication and treatments at large scale. the lecture are not support that point beca...
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...ture are not support that point because its a high costly and time consuming proces...
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...some time natural and man-made activity are also causes declines the frog popula...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.01324503311 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 247.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2024291498 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62786623163 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546558704453 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0549064048 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7857142857 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06452816374 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443143440567 0.272083759551 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162190063852 0.0996497079465 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116940710791 0.0662205650399 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278627148161 0.162205337803 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424802579864 0.0443174109184 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.8541721854 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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