TPO 40
The main idea of both the reading passage and the lecture is about whether permanent human living in Venus is plausible or not. With this in mind, the speaker categorically refutes three ideas mention in the text citing that living in Venus would be challenging, but it is possible.
First, the author claims that the amount of pressure on the Venus in much more greater in contrast to Earth's surface, which means that any landed spacecraft on Venus will be crushed. On the other hand, based on the information presented by the lecturer, by building a floating station like a ballon, human can live in fifty kilometer above the Venus's surface since the higher elevate goes up, the lower pressure will be experienced. therefore, in the atmosphere above the surface, there is no danger for human at all.
Second, the writer asserts that Venus is lack of water supply besides oxygen. Also, the Venus's atmosphere mainly contains carbon dioxide, nitrogen and sulfuric acid. However, according to the talk, making water and oxygen from Venus atmosphere is possible because human can produce oxygen and water from chemical reaction of carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid of the atmosphere and obtaining water and oxygen is easy enough which means that there is no need to importing water from the earth.
Eventually, while the writer maintains that due to thick cloud, 60 percent of Venus's sunlight will be eliminated. The lectures cast doubts on the idea mentioning that clouds above the atmospher are not very thick. It means that human can use the reflection light of the clouds in the way to produce electricity energy for power of the station.
- TPO 40 76
- In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is good rule or a bad rule? 70
- Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is viewed as a bad quality for a person to have. But now it is considered as a good quality of a person. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'greater' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: greater
...amount of pressure on the Venus in much more greater in contrast to Earths surface, which me...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
... like a ballon, human can live in fifty kilometer above the Venuss surface since the high...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...the lower pressure will be experienced. therefore, in the atmosphere above the surface, t...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, in contrast, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 276.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00362318841 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46022763516 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6417506447 49.2860985944 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.545454545 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 21.698381199 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06452816374 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448417268649 0.272083759551 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147570152775 0.0996497079465 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678792122244 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228004232818 0.162205337803 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511521256603 0.0443174109184 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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