The reading and the lecture are both about existing of bees on Earth as early as 200 million years ago. The author of the article provides three views of the skeptics doubting that the bees did not exist 200 million years ago. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the passage. Her position is that the theories are not convincing.
According to the reading, there are no fossil remnants of actual bees in the fossilized structures for 200 million years ago. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. She claims that for fossilizing the bees, some sticky substance should exist. This sticky substance is produced by a particular tree that was rare 200 million years ago. As a result, the bees might exist 200 million years ago, but the substance fossilizing them was not available.
Secondly, the author suggests that flowering plants were absent 200 million years ago, which are the main source of bees’ food. The professor, however, asserts that bees fed on non-flowering plants 200 million years ago, such as pine trees. By emerging flowering plants, bees adapted to feed on them.
Finally, the writer posits that the nest chambers found in Arizona lack some of the finer details of modern bees' nests. In contrast, the lecturer's stance is that chemical experiences show that the 200 million-year chambers have a water-proof substance as the modern chambers have.
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Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 14 12
No. of Words: 230 250
No. of Characters: 1122 1200
No. of Different Words: 118 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.894 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.878 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.471 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.447 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.386 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.585 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.172 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4