TPO 45 Q1
The reading claims that the fossils which has been found recently are not for bees and they did not exist 200 million years ago. However, the lecturer finds all the ideas dubious and presents some evidence to refute them all.
The author argues that no fossil remains of actual bees have ever been found that date to 200 million years ago. Conversely, the professor underlines the fact that although this claim is true, it does not mean that they are not fossils of bees. According to the professor bees need specific trees which have specific liquid in order to help them preserve. Since These trees are rare, they might not find these trees 200 million years ago. So it does not mean that they did not exist.
Furthermore, the reading posits that bees feed exclusively on flowers of flowering plants which were not available 200 million years ago. On the contrary, the lecturer brings up the idea that although bees have a mutually dependent biological relationship with flowers, it is possible that bees used to consume none-flower as their food. Then she asserts that it is possible that bees adopt themselves when flower evolved and they have started to eat flowers ever since.
Finally, the passage holds the idea that fossilized structures found in Arizona lack some of the finer details of bees, nests. In contrast, the lecturer dismissed this idea due to the fact that there are some chemical evidence which can help to prove that these fossils actually blong to the bees. She explained that modern bees are using some water prof chemical in their nest. By analyzing the fossilized structures , they found the same chemical.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ilized structures found in Arizona lack some of the finer details of bees, nests. In contra...
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Line 7, column 418, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... By analyzing the fossilized structures , they found the same chemical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, conversely, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, then, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 278.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91366906475 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28001505989 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517985611511 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8876587107 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5714285714 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0846403657173 0.272083759551 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357571281067 0.0996497079465 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0181716486458 0.0662205650399 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589850267209 0.162205337803 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191843041199 0.0443174109184 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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