TPO 40 Q 1
The reading claims that it is not possible for human to maintain a permanent presence on Venus and provide three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that it might be possible. He explained a new idea that the station can be floating in the atmospher and 50 killometers above of the venus' surfance. He finds all the reading's ideas dubious and presents some evidence to refute them all.
First, the author argues that the atmospheric pressure at venus' surface is at least 90 times greater than the pressure at earth's surface. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that using above idea can solve this problem. By increasing the hight the pressure will be droped consequently. So making a floating station 50 kilometers above the surface can guarantee the equal pressure which earth surface has.In this case there is not any crushed.
Furthermore, the reading posits that there are no water or oxygen on venus' surface. On the contrary, the professor underlines the fact that the author already admit that there are corbon dioxid and sulfuric acid on the venus' surface. Human can use these chemical and compound them to produce water and oxygen and they dont need to import them.
Finally, the reading holds the view that very little sunlught reaches the planet's surface because of the thick clouds. In contrast, the speaker dismissed this issue due to the fact that although the statement is true, using the idea of making floating station can be solve this problem as well. Since the clouds in the atmosphere are not as thick as the clouds in the lower layer solar cells can benefit of more sunlight. Also, solar cells can use the sunlight which get reflected by the thick clouds in the lower layer. In another word they can use both direct and reflected sunlight.
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- Do you agree or disagree?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... equal pressure which earth surface has.In this case there is not any crushed. ...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'dioxids'?
Suggestion: dioxids
...hor already admit that there are corbon dioxid and sulfuric acid on the venus surface....
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...em to produce water and oxygen and they dont need to import them. Finally, the re...
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Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion can be solve this problem as well. Since the clouds in the atmosphere are not as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, so, well, at least, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 305.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88852459016 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37917598467 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7729088916 49.2860985944 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1875 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06452816374 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355472693037 0.272083759551 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108430952517 0.0996497079465 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631137018011 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199153287877 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037195716907 0.0443174109184 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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