The reading and the lecture are both about pterosaurs which is ancient group of winged reptiles that lived along side the dinosaurs. The author of the reading believe that pterosaurs are not warm- blooded. thus,they are not able to fly and walk fast. The lecturar cast doubt on the claims made in the article. He says that pterosaurs can fly and walk fast due to their warm blooded body.
first of all, the author points out that due to cold- blooded body of pterasous they can not fly because their powered flight required for extensive amount of energy which they can not produce. The point is challenged by the lecturer. He says recent studies have been show that petrosaurs bodies are covered with fur which help them to maintain their body warm and lead them to produce huge amount of energy for flying.
secondly, the author believe that due to heavy weight the pterosaurs are no able to take off from the land. the speaker rebuts this arguments. She suggest ancient reptiles such as pterosaurs have unique anatomical structures like hollow bones which help them to control their body weight and they can fly steadily.
finally, the author states that because of weak muscles in their legs such reptiles can not run fast. The lecture, on the other hand, posit that the pterpsurs use all their four limbs for walking fast
to sum up, the lecture and reading are about ancient reptiles. The professor effectively challenge the claim made in the article.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: ALONG_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alongside'?
Suggestion: alongside
...ent group of winged reptiles that lived along side the dinosaurs. The author of the readin...
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Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
... that pterosaurs are not warm- blooded. thus,they are not able to fly and walk fast....
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...t pterosaurs are not warm- blooded. thus,they are not able to fly and walk fast. The ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...k fast due to their warm blooded body. first of all, the author points out that due ...
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Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that petrosaurs bodies are covered with fur which help them to maintain their bo...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...duce huge amount of energy for flying. secondly, the author believe that due to heavy w...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: HEAVY_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
...econdly, the author believe that due to heavy weight the pterosaurs are no able to take off ...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... are no able to take off from the land. the speaker rebuts this arguments. She sugg...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e off from the land. the speaker rebuts this arguments. She suggest ancient reptiles...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
... the speaker rebuts this arguments. She suggest ancient reptiles such as pterosaurs hav...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...body weight and they can fly steadily. finally, the author states that because of weak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, secondly, so, thus, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 252.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80158730159 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21883244864 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.1373913562 49.2860985944 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4285714286 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315792454803 0.272083759551 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987502050263 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651593946294 0.0662205650399 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15698508591 0.162205337803 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739651794444 0.0443174109184 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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