In the modern era, people's lives are going through changes and become more complex. As some people may hold the view that since modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize; however, some others may take an opposite viewpoint. As far as I am concerned, I personally agree with first belief due to myriad reasons. I will delve into most conspicuous ones, which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
First and foremost, when the lives become more comlex in respect of prior, forecasting the future become harder which means every changes in the wide world could cause lots of issue. Based on this, people, especially young people should be ready for these issues and manage several situation. The ability of management and solving issues naturally come from planning and organizing. Not only planning but also organizing situations is need. Planning helps young adults to understand their position in future life and organizing helps to order actions in future. For example, when I have finish college, I planned entering university in my favor field of science. Furthermore, I have organized my steps to succeed in exams to the extend that I graduated in data science last year.
The second reason, one should take into account this significant that have a plausible plan for future can relieve stress. Young people often face situations which never experience them before. This lack of knowledge about different
circumstances causes mental illnesses, particularly stress is the main tangible reason of mental problems. The ability to plan and organize situations give the young people guarantee that they could control every phenomena in future. Thus, this controlling on future decisions relaxes young adults and avoids these people to get mental illnesses. For instance, my friend never have had a simple plan for her life, until one day she bankrupted since lots of debts. She never had a plan to gave them back to the extend that she faced lots of financing issues.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and examples leads us to the conclusion that based upon the today's lifestyle. incapacity to forecast the future and relieve stress are two main reason of my statement. Actually there are some other reasons and examples advocate the claim which is not mentioned above. By and large I highly recommend that young people should gain the ability to plan and organize circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'several situations'.
Suggestion: several situations
...ld be ready for these issues and manage several situation. The ability of management and solving ...
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Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e and organizing helps to order actions in future. For example, when I have finish colleg...
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Line 3, column 726, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ganized my steps to succeed in exams to the extend that I graduated in data science last y...
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Line 3, column 730, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[2]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...zed my steps to succeed in exams to the extend that I graduated in data science last y...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... This lack of knowledge about different circumstances causes mental illnesses, p...
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Line 6, column 224, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...that they could control every phenomena in future. Thus, this controlling on future decis...
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Line 6, column 241, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ontrol every phenomena in future. Thus, this controlling on future decisions relaxes...
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Line 6, column 507, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e never had a plan to gave them back to the extend that she faced lots of financing issues...
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Line 6, column 511, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[2]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...ver had a plan to gave them back to the extend that she faced lots of financing issues...
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Line 8, column 103, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...s to the conclusion that based upon the todays lifestyle. incapacity to forecast the f...
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Line 8, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Incapacity
...n that based upon the todays lifestyle. incapacity to forecast the future and relieve stre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1373.03311258 150% => OK
No of words: 405.0 270.72406181 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09382716049 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58894982178 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 145.348785872 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56049382716 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 419.366225166 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2060771433 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7727272727 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4090909091 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06452816374 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.075095142761 0.272083759551 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237218668069 0.0996497079465 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0177311027768 0.0662205650399 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0446769358208 0.162205337803 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221515513385 0.0443174109184 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 63.6247240618 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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