TPO 8: the Chevalier's memoir accuracy
The reading claims that the accuracy of memoir written by the Chevalier is not right and he inevts many events in it. Nevertheless, the professor cast dount on it and believe that the memoir are pretty accurate and reliable for historians.
First, the reading states that the Chevalier was not wealthy because he borrowed considerable sums of money from a Swiss merchant. However, the speaker states that borrowing money does not mean the Chevalier was poor. He has a lot of assets that sold it for parties and gambling. Therefore, the Chevalier was waiting for his money to arrive and because of that, he borrowed some money.
Second, according to the lecture, the Chevalier completed his memoir after many years that he meets the Voltairs. Hence, it is not possible to remember all the conversation accurately. In contrast, the lecturer explains that the Chevalier each night after meeting Voltaire wrote about what he remembered about their conversation. Some witnesses exist that say he consult with others and kept writing for many years.
Third, based on the passage, critics believe that the escape of the jail is just for making his reading more enjoyable. Since the Chevalier had a lot of politically well-connected friends, he was able to bribe the jailer and escape the prison. On the contrary, the speaker asserts that many other prisons have more powerful friends than the Chevalier but they could not escape the prison. Also, the ceiling of the Chevalier was repaired after his escape and because of that we can accept he escape from ceiling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'consults'.
Suggestion: consults
...ation. Some witnesses exist that say he consult with others and kept writing for many y...
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Line 4, column 491, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'escapes'.
Suggestion: escapes
...pe and because of that we can accept he escape from ceiling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, well, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 260.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57343046898 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534615384615 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6576560119 49.2860985944 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.8571428571 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199496872191 0.272083759551 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074083542704 0.0996497079465 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757290324833 0.0662205650399 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137999182345 0.162205337803 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778631840586 0.0443174109184 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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