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There has been some debates among whether the policy (let it burn )is beneficial or not. The lecture says that the let it burn fire policy has many advantages. The reading argues that the policy harm the park
The first point of dispute is that the yellow stone fire causes tremendous change to the park's trees and vegetation. The lecture says that after the fire, the appearance of new smaller plant become more easily. According to the lecture, some new plant need open unshaded area to grow, also some seeds need to be exposed to extreme heat to spread. That is how the fire benefit the park. On the other hand, the reading contradicts this point by saying that many vegetation and plants were harmed. All the trees were blackened and devastated.
Another controversial issue is that the wild life of the park was affected by the park fire. The lecture claims that the fire creates new opportunity and ideal life for new animals. For example, rabbits and a hares become inhabitant in the park and they have new predators living in the park as well. However, the reading disagrees with this point stating that the disruption of animals habitat and the disruption of food chain make it impossible for wild animals to continue their living in the park.
The final point of the debate is that the park become less attractive to tourists after the fire. The lecture says that the fire was not the only reason for all the destruction happened in the park. At that time there was heavy rain and strong wind accompanied to the fire that cause the park to be less attractive to tourists. But since 1988 after the fire, there was no evidences for such wind or rain. The visitors started to visit the park every year. Yet, the reading argues that due to the fire large number of tourists decided to stay away from the park.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 329.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68389057751 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32520213745 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495440729483 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2503497929 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.733333333 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06452816374 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 4.19205298013 429% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416279880709 0.272083759551 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156291167252 0.0996497079465 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588913931717 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255974786832 0.162205337803 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332383943631 0.0443174109184 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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