TPO12-Integrated writing
While Jane Austin is one of the most popular among all English novelists, her real appearance is still a mystery. However, recently a professionally painted portrait of a teenage girl with full-length size was thought to figure out the mystery. There are some reasonable answers to convince the public, but from the lecture we know that the reasons are not at all evidencing. Instead, they leave many questions.
Primarily, in 1882 Austen’s family has endorsed the claim that the teenage girl is Austen with no doubts. Although the words coming from Austen’s family can be authoritative, in the year 1882, Austen has been dead for almost 70 years. Thus, we can infer that Austen’s family at that time didn’t really see Austen herself. So only by a picture, they may also have problems recognizing Austen.
Second, the Austen family is really large. So, the appearance of the teenage girl can not only resemble Austen, but also can resemble Austen’s sisters. And among all her siblings, Mary is believed to be the one who can also be the subject of the portrait.
Third, we can not attribute this portrait to Ozias Humphrey only due to the similar style. Actually, we can learn from the canvas where the portrait is depicted that the paper was from a man called William. However, William only sold the canvases when Austen is 27 years old instead of a teenage girl.
So according to all the above reason, we can draw a conclusion as to whether Austen is the subject of this portrait is still a question.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 64, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
... above reason, we can draw a conclusion as to whether Austen is the subject of this portrait ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, may, really, second, so, still, third, thus, while, as to, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 261.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90038314176 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72018239423 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0594965582 49.2860985944 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2666666667 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455554885909 0.272083759551 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162231321662 0.0996497079465 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873720805624 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247805675755 0.162205337803 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072597835873 0.0443174109184 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.3589403974 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.