tpo31
Both the reading passage and the lecture doubt that the evidence was found near the fossil of sinosauropteryx is shown that this dinosaur had feathered. While the reading states that there are several reasons to deny this idea, the professor, on the other hand, refutes all three episodes of arguments mentioned in the reading. Believing that the evidence is strong enough.
First, the writer points the view that it may those fine lines are the trace of skin decomposition into the fibers after dead of the dinosaur. Conversely, the professor makes it clear that other animals remnents that were founded in the site were well preserved without any trace of skin decomposition. Thus, the idea of skin decomposition is not convincing.
Second, the author claims that those fine lines are much likely to be the sinosauropteryx's frills. However, the professor explains that firlls and feathers have different chemical compesition and the result of analysis could show that those fine lines are likely to be feathers rather than frills.
Finally, the reading selection put forth the idea that the lines in the fossil were located in the back of the sinosauropteryx. Therefore, the structure would have been quite useless for helping sinosauropteryx to fly and body heat regulation. On the other hand, the lecturer contradicts this reason and illustrates that feathers are not just use for thermoregulation and fly. For instance, some birds use their colorful feathers to attract mate. As the evidence shows there were traces of orange and whit color near the sinosauropteryx's fossil which could show that sinosauropteryx used its feather inorder to display.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 266.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25187969925 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92232000452 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.924687512 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06452816374 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378524718219 0.272083759551 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119472288003 0.0996497079465 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703773396501 0.0662205650399 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199849210441 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541191358808 0.0443174109184 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.