Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
teachers are role models for students and train future citizens of our society. they respected by students and their parents because of their vital role in having a sustainable development of societies. Some people believe that by increasing the importance of education in these days, teachers respected more than the past decades. However, in my opinion, teachers lose their value because of the rapid thrive of technology and also their outdated methods and information. The ensuing paragraphs explain my reasons in this position.
first compelling reason for reducing the value of teachers in contemporary life is that the role of technology in education system increase day by day. In other words, in the past, teachers were the symbols of education and they were the first and accessible sources of information for students. While, interring to the technology age our life revolutionized in all aspects especially in educational system. thus, students have better and readily access to informative and constructive information, so they don’t tie to teachers for learning new skills or new material.language:FA"> language:FA">Consequently, the position and value of teachers declined and they replaced by .A case in point is the on-line libraries in internet. I remember when I was in second years of high-school, I decided to learn indian language as I couldn’t afford for indian language teacher so I searched in internet and I found a great on-line library which had lots of precise documentaries and books in indian language. that’s why I believe that, now teachers are less appreciated in their society than the past times.
Furthermore, the reduction of teachers’ value is due to their obsolete information and methods using to teach students. In the other words, because of rapid change of technology, teachers must to update their knowledge and methods to keep their position but, economic pressures force them to work more time instead advocate more time to enhance their knowledge. A case in point is the teachers in my country. In my country, teaching is a job with lower salary, so by worsening economy condition since 10 years ago, all teachers have to find a part time job in evening to earn enough money for their living. As a result they don’t have free time to search and elevate their knowledge, thus their value reduce day by day.
In summary, although the enthusiastic of people to have education increase these days, the value of teachers dramatically decrease and this is because of the role of technology in providing alternative methods and sources of information and besides the teachers’ obsolete information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, thus, while, in summary, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2278.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34741784038 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42248369005 2.67179642975 128% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488262910798 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8804063937 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0588235294 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162397035971 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627580955189 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049309097752 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992028472732 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366491467354 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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