TPO49 integrated
Both writer and speaker focus on history of William Shakespeare whether he wrote plays and poems by himself or not. The writer states that he did not write all of poems and plays. In contrast, the writer refutes
To begin with, based on the text, Shakespeare had only a basic grammar school education and also he have never been to other country. On the other hand, the lecturer argue that it is true that he have never attended college but he can use book to study by himself. Moreover, to write poems or plays do not depend on education but it depends on creativity. there are plenty of artist who is uneducated.
In addition, according to the passage, there are no evidences related to Shakespeare as author. On the contrary, there are some records that refer to Shakespeare in 1592. also, it is over 400 years ago since the spelling of his name might be different.
Finally, the author mentions that a member of England's aristocracy was responsible for works attributed to Shakespeare. However, the professor argues that a member of England's aristocracy had died before shakespeare's works were written.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. In contrast, the writer refutes To begin with, based on the text, Shakes...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ic grammar school education and also he have never been to other country. On the oth...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e lecturer argue that it is true that he have never attended college but he can u...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...education but it depends on creativity. there are plenty of artist who is uneducated....
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Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun artist seems to be countable; consider using: 'plenty of artists'.
Suggestion: plenty of artists
...but it depends on creativity. there are plenty of artist who is uneducated. In additio...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lenty of artist who is uneducated. In addition, according to the passage, t...
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Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ords that refer to Shakespeare in 1592. also, it is over 400 years ago since the spe...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng of his name might be different. Finally, the author mentions that a memb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, in contrast, it is true, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 1373.03311258 68% => OK
No of words: 190.0 270.72406181 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92105263158 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67264795501 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 419.366225166 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1576316751 49.2860985944 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06452816374 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0481717387373 0.272083759551 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0163457450994 0.0996497079465 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0175797657099 0.0662205650399 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0257878558908 0.162205337803 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161562995077 0.0443174109184 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.3589403974 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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