Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
In recent years, word-changing enormously with the advent of new ideas and concepts. Therefore, people's' needs and thoughts are changing rapidly and no two days are the same. In addition, due to exceeding technological improvement and a hectic lifestyle which cause us to forget what is the true definition of happiness or satisfaction. Also, when it comes to my position, by weighing up the pros and cons, I strongly believe that the benefits of advanced technologies are undeniable but lead people into trouble of being stressful, perplexed, hopeless for some reasons. Which I will explore in the following.
First and foremost, the main reason why I hold this idea is that, modern technology introduce new products day by day like smart phone, smart watch and new cars that through advertising they induce persons to buy them which cause people to work hard to provide themselves with the latest devices. While previously, our ancestors had a simple lifestyle without concern of being up to date. For instance, once my grandfather told me that when he was a kid in their village they worked together on the farm and after that they came together to have fun and share their dinners and life was a party to be thrown. All in all, these days,many people spend their life working hard and they are completely unaware of life is transitory.
Moreover, studies have shown that unfortunately young generation criteria for feeling happiness and pleasure have changed a lot. For example, using drugs and alcohol drinks come to be an epidemic way of laughing and getting a sense of satisfaction which have harmful effects on their health and their feature. So governments struggle to renew traditional costumes and ways of life for being glad. For instance, in my country, authorities added a new course about our ancestor lifestyle to elementary school courses to teach children a set of our ancestors principles about being happiness and satisfaction.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons, I totally agree with that new generation is less happy and less gratifying than our forefathers had.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
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Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09248554913 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86802496078 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615606936416 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6167350277 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.857142857 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161233751632 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545915635148 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056863064669 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117211100307 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690556299492 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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