TPO52IntegratedTask-Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice. There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system. Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet, Mars, some think that sending people to an asteroid would actually be the best colonization option for a number of reasons. Low Gravity To begin with, asteroids are often much smaller than planets, so they have lower gravity. When landing a spaceship, the craft would not be pulled as strongly or as forcefully toward the asteroid's surface, making the landing safer than landing on the Moon or Mars; it would also allow a spacecraft to carry much more equipment needed to set up the colony. It would also be easier for the spacecraft to take off again, so the spaceship would need to carry considerably less fuel for the trip back to Earth. Mining Valuable Metals Next some asteroids are rich in valuable elements and precious metals that are relatively rare on Earth, such as gold and platinum. An asteroid colony would be extremely profitable and a good source of these raw materials. The colonists or businesses sponsoring them could more than pay for the cost of their support by mining minerals and sending them back to Earth. Easy to Reach Finally, asteroids are a good option for colonization because some of them would be very easy to reach. There are a number of asteroids that periodically come within or near Earth's orbit Some of them actually get closer to Earth than our Moon. So these asteroids would be much easier and more affordable to get to and get back from than a planet like Mars, which would require a two-year trip in each direction.
The reading and lecture both talk about asteroids, which is determining a profitable source for the planet. On the other hand, the speaker rejects all claims and casts doubt upon them.
First, the written text claims that due to low gravity and the small size of asteroids, it would be easy to provide the equipment needed to set up the colony. In addition, it states that it needs less fuel for the trip back to Earth. In contrast, the orator opposes, saying that low gravity also presents certain risks and people start to losing muscle mass and bone density. So, they would be suffering from health problems.
Second, from the author's point of view, there is a possibility of mining extraction facilities and states asteroids might be profitable. The monologue rebuts the claiming that it is not profitable of mining minerals. Since, the cost of supporting a colony is high and no profit, also there won't be any guarantee to sell by lowering profit.
Finally, the author claims that for reaching on them, people need just a short time because they come close to the earth even closer that moon. In contrast, the professor is of the opinion that the distances are varied between the year and year. it might be easy to go there, but the earth is not readily accessible when they want to come back. As a matter of fact, orbiting around the sun become different at this time. therefore, the time to come back to earth is not getting shorter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...s are varied between the year and year. it might be easy to go there, but the eart...
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Line 7, column 422, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... the sun become different at this time. therefore, the time to come back to earth is not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, in addition, in contrast, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70866141732 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37015721742 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5476103389 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4285714286 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06452816374 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315332330991 0.272083759551 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928486500806 0.0996497079465 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607755940161 0.0662205650399 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156108510365 0.162205337803 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578296716568 0.0443174109184 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.