According to the reading passage, it is satated that recently scientists have detected a unique whale that sings at the frequency of 52-hertz which is very different from the sound other whales make. Afterwards the article provides theories that are proposed by scientists about the cause of this animal's eccentric high-pitched song. However, the professor in the listening states why the assumptions mentioned in the reading passage were not correct and refutes them by describing three reasons as follows.
Firstly, the reading claims that this animal can be a hybrid which is the offspring of two other whale species. The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that hybrids usually have a migration pattern and they travel together. He adds that after analyzing the sounds it makes, scientists found out that this animal do not follow this pattern and it migrates alone; hence, it can't be a hybrid.
Secondly, the article posits that the other reason for this high-pitched song is that 52-hertz whale may have a damaged hearing and it may learn to sing by listening to other whales singing. In contrast, the professor says that just as in humans, that pitch is related to animal's physical structure of the throat and it originates in there. According to the professor since there is no connection between the throat and hearing system, this theory is not rational.
Finally, the reading says that other hypothesis is that the 52-hertz whale may be the only known member of a rare species. The professor opposes this point by explaining that if this whale is the only leftover of a extinct species, it should had parents, which were around recently. He goes on to say that technology have been in use for decades, but it hasn't detected any other whales like this one; thus, this theory about the only member of a rare species can not be acceptable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y describing three reasons as follows. Firstly, the reading claims that this an...
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...attern and it migrates alone; hence, it cant be a hybrid. Secondly, the articl...
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...attern and it migrates alone; hence, it cant be a hybrid. Secondly, the articl...
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...tes alone; hence, it cant be a hybrid. Secondly, the article posits that the ot...
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...g system, this theory is not rational. Finally, the reading says that other hyp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 315.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90793650794 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51541981798 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.4834882445 49.2860985944 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.833333333 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 21.698381199 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460343019009 0.272083759551 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175324539354 0.0996497079465 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14774528049 0.0662205650399 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290936575515 0.162205337803 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715143355754 0.0443174109184 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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