Traditional Yemeni wedding
Do you know how Yemeni people celebrate their weddings? All people around the world celebrate wedding parties in which they give the groom and the bride their best days during this party. In addition, they dress them delighting and beautiful clothes either traditional or modern. Each one of these people has his own customs and traditions. For example, in Yemeni society, they have three main steps to celebrate weddings: the engagement, the wedding vows, and the wedding party.
Initially, the female relatives of the young man go and visit the girl's house, and they look to her. Then they get back to the man and describe her. Moreover, the man has the right to take a legitimate look at a girl. Eventually, if he agrees to marry her, they propose the girl for the young man. If the opposite happens, then everything goes back to its normal way
The second step is the wedding vows in which the young man and the girl become legally a married couple. After the man pays the girl's dowry, they call a sheikh to make the wedding vows; by giving some Islamic advices, motivating young men to marry, and telling the young man and the girl's father or representative what to say.
The last and the longest step is the wedding party. We do a lot of things and have much fun. For example, few days before the wedding party we invite people whom we know, and in the wedding day, we welcome them. Beside, we bring and prepare a big feast with meat for the guests. Afternoon, we go dancing in our traditional way like Zerbady dance and Pitaiq dance. Moreover, we make a night musical party, and we bring a singer, or we make a comedian play. Sometimes we make a party before the wedding day we call it "Sharih".
To conclude, ways of wedding parties are different all over the world. Sometimes they depend on people's ancestries, customs, or religions. Furthermore, wedding is the start line of eternal happy life. No matter how different are the ways, what matters is how they enjoy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, for example, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 7.30242825607 274% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 352.0 270.72406181 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67329545455 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48760972753 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 419.366225166 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.51434878587 462% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1519961081 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7727272727 110.228320801 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 7.06452816374 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239528107119 0.272083759551 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689521995989 0.0996497079465 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796061262636 0.0662205650399 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123192609748 0.162205337803 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101641250004 0.0443174109184 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.2367328918 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.42419426049 82% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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