Traditional Yemeni Wedding

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Traditional Yemeni Wedding

Do you know how Yemeni people celebrate their weddings? All people around the world celebrate wedding parties in which they give the groom and the bride their best days during this party. In addition, they dress them delighting and beautiful clothes either traditional or modern. Each one of these people has his own customs and traditions. For example, in Yemeni society, they have three main steps to celebrate weddings: the engagement, the wedding vows, and the wedding party.

Initially, the female relatives of the young man go and visit the girl's house, and they look to her. Then they get back to the man and describe her. Moreover, the man has the right to take a legitimate look at a girl. Eventually, if he agrees to marry her, they propose the girl for the young man. If the opposite happens, then everything goes back to its normal way

The second step is the wedding vows in which the young man and the girl become legally a married couple. After the man pays the girl's dowry, they call a sheikh to make the wedding vows; by giving some Islamic advices, motivating young men to marry, and telling the young man and the girl's father or representative what to say.

The last and the longest step is the wedding party. We do a lot of things and have a lot of fun. For example, few days before the wedding ceremony we invite people whom we know and have a friendly meeting, and when the big day comes, we kindly welcome the guests Besides, we bring and prepare a big feast for them. In the afternoon, we go dancing in our traditional way like Zerbady dance and Pitaiq dance. Moreover, we make a musical night party I'm which we bring a singer, or make a comedian play. Sometimes we make a party before the wedding day we call it "Sharih".

To conclude, styles of wedding ceremonies differ from country to another and Yemeni weddings are full of religious antique traditions.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, for example, in addition, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 7.30242825607 274% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 337.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6528189911 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49777965838 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528189910979 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2963120863 49.2860985944 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1111111111 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256845986622 0.272083759551 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825544811264 0.0996497079465 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951752779696 0.0662205650399 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156968551135 0.162205337803 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121786379668 0.0443174109184 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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