turtle excluding device
The reading and the lecture are both about the usage of turtle excluder device (TED) which is useful to save the population of turtles from the shrimp fishing boats. The author of reading thinks that TED has been criticized for several ways. The lecturer casts doubt on the points made in the reading and says that TED is very good way to protect the turtles.
First of all, the author points out that cost of using TED is relatively better than chances of turtles to trapped by shrimpers. The lecturer challenged this point by mentioning that there are thousands of shrimp- boats are operating in USA. If yearly thousand of turtles trap by each shrimp-boat, then it will be dangerous for their populations as compared to their population. Therefore, TED is effective way to save them.
Secondly, the author states that another method can be use to save them, like the shortening of the time limit that shrimp boats allowed to keep their net underwater. The lecturer refutes this point and states that it is possible only in theory. The government cannot check the time limit of net. Thus, TED monitoring is best method to check the presence of turtles in the net.
Finally, the author mentions that TED is not effective for larger species of sea turtles, so they cannot escape from the net. The lecturer, on the other hand, states that for the larger species of turtles, TED modification is possible. Additionally, by the usage of modified TED, shrimpers can easily save the turtles, because they can escape from the net.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...D has been criticized for several ways. The lecturer casts doubt on the points made...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...- boats are operating in USA. If yearly thousand of turtles trap by each shrimp-boat, th...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: BE_USE_TO_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...uthor states that another method can be use to save them, like the shortening of th...
^^^
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...uthor states that another method can be use to save them, like the shortening of th...
^^^
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...time limit of net. Thus, TED monitoring is best method to check the presence of turtles...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 263.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83269961977 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46057258404 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513307984791 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0608895495 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7857142857 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137607266788 0.272083759551 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475730315796 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103986263527 0.0662205650399 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870716688777 0.162205337803 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849911185718 0.0443174109184 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.3589403974 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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