The reading passage and lecture talk about the turtle excluder device that is incorporated in the shrimpers net to prevent caught of turtles inside the nets. The reading passage criticizes the using of TED for several reasons. The author claims that there is no benefit from the utilize of TED. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She mentions, TED is crucial equipment in shrimp boat to protect turtles.
First, the author states, there is a limited number of turtles that may attach to net, may be only one each net, in contrast to a lot of shrimps that may caught by net . This point contradicts by lecturer. She says, there are thousand nets in the sea, even though only one turtle may incorporate in net, therefore, there are thousand turtles may cought in these nets every days, moreover this number is very large and endanger to the turtle population.
Second, the writer points to shortening the time that the nets under water give opportunity to shrimper to save turtles which are enter the nets by free them after a short time before they dye. The professor reputes this argument, she suggests that, this is correct only theoretically, put practically it is difficult for government to control the time that can brought up the turtle for air, since there are many nets in the same time which is very hard for patrol to control their time.
Finally, the author claims, there are many turtles have a large size that cannot pass through the TED , therefore, TED impractical. The professor in the other hand illustrates to, it is easy to adjust the TED size to be able to the large turtle to pass through it.
The reading passage and lecture talk about the turtle excluder device that is incorporated in the shrimpers net to prevent caught of turtles inside the nets. The reading passage criticizes the using of TED for several reasons. The author claims that there is no benefit from the utilize of TED. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She mentions, TED is crucial equipment in shrimp boat to protect turtles.
First, the author states, there is a limited number of turtles that may attach to net, may be only one each net, in contrast to a lot of shrimps that may caught by net . This point contradicts by lecturer. She says, there are thousand nets in the sea, even though only one turtle may incorporate in net, therefore, there are thousand turtles may cought in these nets every days, moreover this number is very large and endanger to the turtle population.
Second, the writer points to shortening the time that the nets under water give opportunity to shrimper to save turtles which are enter the nets by free them after a short time before they dye. The professor reputes this argument, she suggests that, this is correct only theoretically, put practically it is difficult for government to control the time that can brought up the turtle for air, since there are many nets in the same time which is very hard for patrol to control their time.
Finally, the author claims, there are many turtles have a large size that cannot pass through the TED , therefore, TED impractical. The professor in the other hand illustrates to, it is easy to adjust the TED size to be able to the large turtle to pass through it.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s the using of TED for several reasons. The author claims that there is no benefit ...
^^^
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...or claims that there is no benefit from the utilize of TED. The lecturer casts doubt on cla...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... is no benefit from the utilize of TED. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in a...
^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent in shrimp boat to protect turtles. First, the author states, there is a lim...
^^^
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... a lot of shrimps that may caught by net . This point contradicts by lecturer. She...
^^
Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...adicts by lecturer. She says, there are thousand nets in the sea, even though only one t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urtle may incorporate in net, therefore, there are thousand turtles may cought in...
^^
Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...corporate in net, therefore, there are thousand turtles may cought in these nets every ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and endanger to the turtle population. Second, the writer points to shortening ...
^^
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'entered'.
Suggestion: entered
...y to shrimper to save turtles which are enter the nets by free them after a short tim...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hard for patrol to control their time. Finally, the author claims, there are ma...
^^^
Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ge size that cannot pass through the TED , therefore, TED impractical. The profess...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o the large turtle to pass through it.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 286.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71678321678 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41348919063 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531468531469 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0142437137 49.2860985944 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.416666667 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06452816374 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488709863728 0.272083759551 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177962498368 0.0996497079465 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188831451366 0.0662205650399 285% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28379986807 0.162205337803 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.222528589713 0.0443174109184 502% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s the using of TED for several reasons. The author claims that there is no benefit ...
^^^
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...or claims that there is no benefit from the utilize of TED. The lecturer casts doubt on cla...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... is no benefit from the utilize of TED. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in a...
^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent in shrimp boat to protect turtles. First, the author states, there is a lim...
^^^
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... a lot of shrimps that may caught by net . This point contradicts by lecturer. She...
^^
Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...adicts by lecturer. She says, there are thousand nets in the sea, even though only one t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urtle may incorporate in net, therefore, there are thousand turtles may cought in...
^^
Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...corporate in net, therefore, there are thousand turtles may cought in these nets every ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and endanger to the turtle population. Second, the writer points to shortening ...
^^
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'entered'.
Suggestion: entered
...y to shrimper to save turtles which are enter the nets by free them after a short tim...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hard for patrol to control their time. Finally, the author claims, there are ma...
^^^
Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ge size that cannot pass through the TED , therefore, TED impractical. The profess...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o the large turtle to pass through it.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 286.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71678321678 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41348919063 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531468531469 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0142437137 49.2860985944 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.416666667 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06452816374 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488709863728 0.272083759551 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177962498368 0.0996497079465 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188831451366 0.0662205650399 285% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28379986807 0.162205337803 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.222528589713 0.0443174109184 502% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.