working for four-day week and it impacts on employees and the company.
The topic is about working for four-day week and it impacts on employees and the company.
The writer takes the position that working four-day workweek for four-fifths of their normal pay would benefit the economy as well as employees and companies. By Contrast, the lecturer is strongly opposed to this idea, he believes that it will costs the company more money.
The lecturer casts doubt on the writer's position on the profit that the company will make. For instance she makes the point that companies will spend money on trainning and medical benefit, Furthermore they will have to create more office space and computers. According to the writer, however, he thinks that employees will rest and as consequence they will not make much errors and mistakes in their work.
In another instance, the lecturer argues that the writer is wrong to believe that this option will increase employment's rate and improve quality life. She give evidence of her opinion by showing that the company will expect that the employee will do the work of 5 days in 4 days which means that no additional will be create, in addition, their job will not be pleasant as before, which can reduce their quality of life, and harm their chances of an advancing career. In this regard, the writer believes that employees would have extra time to spend with their families, and enjoying their hobbies
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-04-03 | linda0012 | 60 | view |
| 2020-11-20 | Adnane1998 | 70 | view |
| 2020-07-25 | talelaldabous | 76 | view |
| 2020-07-02 | Saara | 76 | view |
| 2019-12-31 | dew2222 | 80 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cost'
Suggestion: cost
... to this idea, he believes that it will costs the company more money. The lecturer c...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...t and as consequence they will not make much errors and mistakes in their work. In ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...ents rate and improve quality life. She give evidence of her opinion by showing that...
^^^^
Line 4, column 597, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir families, and enjoying their hobbies
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 233.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90987124464 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34327689371 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55364806867 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1239155324 49.2860985944 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.111111111 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 21.698381199 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06452816374 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311316346322 0.272083759551 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158385462288 0.0996497079465 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192972868485 0.0662205650399 291% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292293270307 0.162205337803 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218623979694 0.0443174109184 493% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.8541721854 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.