working four days a week
Both the lecture and the reading are about working four days a week instead of five days. The author of the reading feels that implementing such a policy has social impact alongside economical beneficious. the lecture challenges the claims made by the author. he is of the opinion that such an approach not only have benefits but also will harm both the economy notions and individual incentive for working.
To begin with, the author argues by working less would result in less errors in a production line since workers might have more time to rest and relax, and companies will increase their margin in this manner. this specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. he claims that providing enough workers to fulfill the required forces, companies would need to hire more labor so more budget is needed to provide training and health benefits for additional employees. hiring more force labor also means more space is needed and all these extra efforts are costly for companies.
secondly, the author suggests, the unemployment rate would decrease. it is said that the twenty percent less working means twenty percent working hours vacancies and an opportunity for those who do not have a job; however, the lecturer rebuts this by mentioning that companies might not accept new forces because of the reasons mentioned before so there will be no more employment and as a result the unemployment rate would not change.
finally, the author posits that those who are not married would have more times to spend time with their family. in contrast the lecturer's position is that the policy would cause risk. the workers might not have jobs stability because in times of economic collapses these are the first to get fired. on the other hand, they would have less merit in their job since companies prefer to select those who are more available. thus, they are less likely to receive a promotion. Never are they likely to receive a promotion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in contrast, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 328.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9512195122 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40401706252 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 419.366225166 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8518158842 49.2860985944 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104067527671 0.272083759551 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037548046407 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114625920456 0.0662205650399 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721445101227 0.162205337803 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075226585557 0.0443174109184 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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