Most of the schools are planning to replace sports and exercise classes with more academic sessions. What i s your opinion on this change? How is this change will affect children’s life in your view?
In this challenging era, undoubtedly, to compete with other education institutions, in terms of providing desirable education, most of the schools are replacing their fitness classes with new technological subjects in their timetables. Many people hold the opinion that it is superior for children future. While, in my viewpoint, this would have negative development for child's growth, which I will try to enunciate below.
Apparently, nowadays, children do not get enough time to spend time in playground because of the multifarious reasons. Firstly, students spend maximum time of their day, eit...
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Dear Sir, Many thanks for
Dear Sir,
Many thanks for your comments.
Regards
Sentence: Many people hold the opinion that it is superior for children future.
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In addition to this winning and losing help them to learn the sportsman spirit
In addition to this winning and losing, it helps them to learn the sportsman spirit
No doubt removing the sport periods from school curriculum and replacing with essential subjects help students to add more time to their learning, which are beneficial for students in their near future.
No doubt removing the sport periods from school curriculum and replacing with essential subjects helps students to add more time to their learning, which is beneficial for students in their near future.
Sentence: For example, while playing children learn how to communicate with each other which develops their communication skills.
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Suggestion: Refer to other and which
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