The graph below shows the proportion of the people aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph provides an information about the proportion of population aged 65 and over for a period between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
From the graph, it is clearly seen that in all countries, it is expected that there will be an overall increase in the proportion of population aged 65 and above over a period of 100 years. In Japan, this proportion was lowest with the value of 5% in 1940, but then with slight fluctuations this value is expected to reach 10% in 2030 and afterwards it is expected to rise dramatically to 25% in 2035. In 1940, USA had the highest percentage o...
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