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young people should be encouraged to pursue long term goals, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition
The issue presented is an interesting one. The goals set by one's self whether a long or short term, for the goals to be termed a great goal: it has to achieve a purpose that would benefit both the individual himself or the society in which he resides.As i agree with most parts of the topic presented, i don't concur to all its premises.
Firstly, a young individual could have a personal goal which is to achieve fame in the shortest possible means and be lionized by the community in which he lives. His urge to attain this goal could be his main motivator and that could push his imagination a...
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