Some people say that having a lot of TV channels is good, while others argue that it reduces the quality of programs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Television is dominating as the best source of amusement in this high-tech era. Presently, some people assert that the availability of a wide range of channels is lucrative to entertain and keep people updated with every sector of life for the betterment. By contrast, the quality of programs has to undergo inferiority. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold points to support the former view. First and foremost, the presence of a large number of channels serves everyone with their desired programs. For example, children and young people are...
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Television is dominating as the best source of amusement in this high-tech era.
Television is considered as the best source of amusement in this high-tech era.
adults and grey generation have tendency to watch the news
adults and grey generation have a/the tendency to watch news
Hence, an umpteen channels comprising abundance of programs are essential to satisfy the needs
Hence, umpteen channels comprising an abundance of programs are essential to satisfy the needs
a massive number of channels has adverse effect
a massive number of channels have adverse effects
they not only exaggerate the programs by adding spice but also manipulate to make them more entertaining.
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