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The use of electronic media has a negative effect on personal relationships between people.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since the invention of modern technology, people start to behave differently with their peers. It is sometimes argued that the intervention of electronic devices is harmful for their mutual lives. In my opinion, I believe that its interposition has a valuable aspect for people's connection in general.
To begin, people, who argue that the modern media such as computer and mobile phone has a negative effect, may claim that they tend to become selfish beings. In the past, people valued the intimacy of relationship by time spending together with their friends for example. Today, however, moder...
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people has to consider.
people have to consider.
This type of relationship which involving the same hobbies will make relationship priceless and last longer.
This type of relationship involving the same hobbies will make relationship priceless and last longer.
This type of relationship which involves the same hobbies will make relationship priceless and last longer.
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