TPO9
In this set of material the article states that Fuel-cell engines' advantages outweigh the internal-combustion engines and provides three reason of support. However the lecturer finds all the idea dubious and presents some evidence to refute them all.
First, the reading passage posits that internal combustion engines need petroleum to work which is finite fuel, and hydrogen is a perfect choice to replace. In contrast, the professor refutes this point by saying that while petroleum is finite, hydrogen is not a good substitute for it. According to the professor the hydrogen can't be used directly and it is not easily access able. Also it demands advanced technologies-get to minus two hundred degree temperature- to produce pure Hydrogen in order to use it.
The next explanation uttered in the article is that Hydrogen-based fuel is better to the environment due to making less pollution than petroleum-based one. On the contrary, the lecturer claims that process of achieving pure hydrogen will create more pollution because it needs huge amount of energy. And this energy should be obtained from oil and petroleum, so its better to use them directly.
Furthermore, the author of the reading passage asserts that fuel-cell engines preferable more than internal combustion engines in terms of financial concerns. Conversely, the speaker says that all experiments with cheap metals to create the pure hydrogen failed and it can be achieved just with expensive metals. Thus, it will cost more money if they want to use these metals and produce the hydrogen to earn its energy.
- A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position. 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 100
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO 24 Integrated Essay 70
fuel-cell engines preferable more than internal combustion engines in terms of financial concerns.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 254 250
No. of Characters: 1304 1200
No. of Different Words: 146 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.992 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.134 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.829 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 2.967 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.361 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.604 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.092 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4