In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
It is right to say that the crime is rapidly increasing in many countries and are becoming more uncontrollable because the prison population growth shows the intensity of crimes occurring in almost half of the world. I totally agree with this point because there are certain reasons why i hold this view.
firstly, it is believed that crimes are antisocial acts.It is obvious to say that more growth in population may be the fact of more growth in crimes.However, where the growth in population increases, obviously the lack of knowledge occurs.In my view, due to over population and lack of knowledge the rate in crimes occurs more intensively. Lets take an example, if a person is well educated he might know the differences between acceptable and unacceptable changes but if a person is illiterate he cannot bear the difficulties of life, he don't know how to react in different circumstances ,so he ended up involving in some sort of criminal activities.
Secondly, i think the dissimilarities between rich and poor might arise crime rates.Infact, i believe that this may cause harsh impact on illegal acts because these days it is very common to see the consequences of poverty and hunger, so in my opinion this may cause a huge impact in crime rates. For instance, rich people can adapt many facilities they want to because they have many economical and financial powers, but in case of poor people they may not have many potentials, so this may source to the crimes.
Lastly, the key aspect to this problem is to take key measures to solve these crime problems.Government should take equal actions for both poor and rich people.They may also set equal and proper opportunities and provide much facilities to overcome their problems. Government should take strict actions in case of crimes occurring. So this may led to reduce the risk in crimes.
Over all, to put in a nut shell, it is indeed and undetermined issue which needs further analysis, solutions and discussions s but with the above discussed ideas and facts it would be easier to control such crime acts, so this may bring benefit to people's lives as well as governments.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241895261845 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.14463840399 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1072319202 0.0946595960268 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0498753117207 0.0501214627716 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0399002493766 0.0437548338989 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122194513716 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0174563591022 0.0403226058552 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.94045251946 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0374064837905 0.0326793684256 114% => OK
Particles: 0.00249376558603 0.00163938923432 152% => OK
Determiners: 0.0847880299252 0.0861772015684 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0374064837905 0.021408717616 175% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00997506234414 0.011925033212 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2159.0 1933.35771543 112% => OK
No of words: 364.0 316.048096192 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93131868132 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324175824176 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239010989011 0.28420135186 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159340659341 0.203846283523 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137362637363 0.137316102897 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94045251946 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.037074148 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546703296703 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 60.4919309369 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 36.4 20.7743622355 175% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.017113976 49.517814964 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.9 127.492653851 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4 20.7743622355 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 0.814263465372 221% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 3.99599198397 350% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 60.3010989011 49.1944974215 123% => OK
Elegance: 1.62765957447 1.69124875643 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414069298246 0.332605444948 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124905877188 0.102741220458 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0585721041101 0.0668466124924 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.677322999698 0.534860350844 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196870021402 0.148594505496 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190034176311 0.134430193775 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957370394844 0.0742795772207 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.329734041731 0.324371583561 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0643512044456 0.0638462369009 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268145801002 0.228012699653 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835930915242 0.058150111329 144% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9