In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Freedom and security are a basic necessities for all the societies. Law and Order is another integral part of the society that helps in ensuring safety of the citizens. Any society that bears a weak trial process faces a lot of criminal activities. A strict approach should be adopted by the government to control the criminal activities and ensure harmony in the society.
A weak and time taking trial process disturbs the harmony of the society. The culprit becomes unafraid and dares to commit heinous crimes. In the past India has experienced some heinous rape cases. For instance The Nirbhaya Rape case of 2016 and the recent Hyderabad Rape and Murder case of 2019. These incidents show that the culprits were unafraid of their governments and dared to not only rape but murder and burn her as well. These cases show that the brutality of the crimes is becoming more and more severe. A lack of proper judicial system directly boosts crime in the society. A strict approach should be adopted against such crimes and quick justice should be served.
The government should come up with strict laws and tighten their grip over such culprits. For instance a Constitutional Amendment regarding the lowering of minor age by the Indian law is a great initiative that will put some pressure on the young culprits. Those who escaped earlier will not dare to repeat the same mistake. Similarly a fast trial process that guarantees a death penalty for the rapist was adopted by Hyderabad government, looking at the seriousness of the situation. Furthermore an encounter was also conducted against the perpetrators. Laws and policies like these will definitely help to control the criminal activities taking place in the society.
Hence, the Judiciary is accountable for controlling the increasing criminal activities. Strict and a faster approach should be adopted while dealing with heinous crimes. No mercy should be given to the culprits, as it rightly said that justice delayed is justice denied. Every citizen has the right to live with its dignity and freedom and the law governing bodies should ensure that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
Freedom and security are a basic necessities for all the societies. Law and Order is...
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Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'necessity'?
Suggestion: necessity
Freedom and security are a basic necessities for all the societies. Law and Order is...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...ll not dare to repeat the same mistake. Similarly a fast trial process that guarantees a ...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ng at the seriousness of the situation. Furthermore an encounter was also conducted against...
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Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es taking place in the society. Hence, the Judiciary is accountable for control...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, look, regarding, similarly, so, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0659025788 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60518179641 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527220630372 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9595043563 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.3636363636 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8636363636 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0898647512668 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279730527094 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375951357053 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534644728377 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341223967502 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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