In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, crimes are very common in this world. The rate of crime is very high in most of the countries and many people commit it aggressively. This essay will discuss the reason for crime and provides suggestion to control them.
Firstly, every citizen is good to the society in which they live. It is the society which changes them to criminals and one such reason is unemployment. Many people who involve in illegal activities such as murder and robbery are jobless. I read news in the internet that happened few months back. Criminals used a device called skimmer to steal money from your bank account. This device was placed in the ATM machines along with a pin hole camera which could read your card details and password. This was an example of a crime that was committed by engineering students who were jobless. As a result, lack of job opportunities makes people commit crime.
Secondly, crimes could be controlled by providing severe punishments. In today's world, law breakers are not afraid of committing crimes because the punishments are very lenient. For example, a group of college students attacked one another with weapons like knives and guns in the college. Immediately, the college took action on them and reported to police. Therefore, the court punished them by putting them in jail for 8 months. Hence, this kind of punishment would stop them doing crime at very young age.
In conclusion, people would not involve in criminal activities if the government provides more job opportunities. Moreover, crimes can also be reduced if the punishments are more effective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion to control them. Firstly, every citizen is good to the society in which ...
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Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[2]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATMs'.
Suggestion: ATMs
... account. This device was placed in the ATM machines along with a pin hole camera which coul...
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Line 9, column 340, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'reported policing'.
Suggestion: reported policing
...ly, the college took action on them and reported to police. Therefore, the court punished them by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04905660377 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.665577682 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.2773890486 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.4210526316 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9473684211 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212023385673 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636968255412 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487376281311 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133654595656 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328719462818 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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