TPO 4- Agree or disagree: In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The argument above asserts that the number of cars will decrease in use than there are today. A simple recognition of the argument lends our discussion to a very significant question of how can people cease to use cars in the future? Although it is broadly based argument which cannot be summed up in a word or so, we need look no further than the fact that using car play a substantial role in our lives. That having been considered, I however adhere to this belief that I totally disagree with this argument and also I should turn a blind eye to it for some critical reasons which will be illustrated at length in subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, the crux of the matter lies in the fact that, using car is a important part of our lives. People use cars for many personal purposes such as traveling, commuting to work, urgent works and etc. Also we know that car has many advantages. In simple terms, it save plenty of time and people use it for some essential things to optimize use of time. In addition, using car would pave the ways for people to accomplish their works easily and quickly. So owing to these reasons that I put forward, developments lead to higher pace in the life. The best point that fit this notion is that nowadays people have many responsibilities and daily works which should fulfill in short time. So they must use car more than using public transportation. Therefore, it goes without saying that using car among people will enhance in 12 years later than today.
Aside from using car for personal purposes, we cannot lose our sight on the fact that, car is very lucrative in social life. It means car is very important in some situations like transportations, emergency occasions. we should consider that car provides fertile grounds and job opportunities for people. To put it in apposite words, we have many taxi drivers in our society which help people to transport everywhere that people feel up to it. For the purpose of the illustration, let’s take the example of an accident which occurred two days ago when I was in the street. It could be incredible but a person help wound persons and take them to the hospital. So because of this aforementioned reasons, there is no denying that, using car play an important role in every one’s life.
To wrap it up, I aver that in 12 years later the majority of the people will use cars for personal purposes or public benefits. Also we should consider all the car disadvantages such as air pollution, traffic and hazardous accidents.
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Essay evaluation report
is a important part
is an important part
it save plenty of time
it saves plenty of time
a person help wound persons and take them
a person helps wound persons and takes them
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 446 350
No. of Characters: 2030 1500
No. of Different Words: 227 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.596 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.552 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.544 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.482 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.483 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.136 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ter lies in the fact that, using car is a important part of our lives. People use...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...veling, commuting to work, urgent works and etc. Also we know that car has many advantag...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saves'?
Suggestion: saves
...as many advantages. In simple terms, it save plenty of time and people use it for so...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...e transportations, emergency occasions. we should consider that car provides ferti...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...r personal purposes or public benefits. Also we should consider all the car disadvan...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'therefore', 'in addition', 'in short', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241308793456 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.147239263804 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0777096114519 0.0866891130778 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0511247443763 0.046263068375 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0613496932515 0.0685040099705 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134969325153 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0368098159509 0.0351676179071 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63787308057 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0286298568507 0.0309702414327 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0040899795501 0.00188951952338 216% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0858895705521 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0286298568507 0.0209618222197 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0184049079755 0.0139019557991 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2531.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 446.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67488789238 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.295964125561 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204035874439 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14798206278 0.174417080927 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0896860986547 0.112833075102 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63787308057 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504484304933 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 57.3850240787 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2727272727 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8113247717 48.84282405 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.045454545 120.699889404 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 40.6763147167 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.5905511811 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247502907507 0.300154397459 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.072872829855 0.103427244359 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0560752905371 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.449487238728 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107355532387 0.151897553556 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979434559659 0.114077575197 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638426500589 0.0781384742642 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.468865736533 0.336927656856 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0799095071288 0.067059652881 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19158522703 0.210909579961 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575878268625 0.0618886996521 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.4623655914 325% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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