Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Learning is the act of acquiring new, modifying and reinforcing, existing knowledge, skills and preferences and may involve synthesizing different type of information. It does not happen all at once, but builds upon and is shaped by previous knowledge. Learning may be viewed as a process, rather than a collection factual and procedural knowledge. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one, is whether in what extend rely on past event can be useful in today's world. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that if people do not know anything about their history, hardly ever can they progress in future. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that in today's hectic world, vast majorities of people are not experienced and learned person, which hardly ever can they make a sound decision. Scientifically speaking, many people confront difficulties, which need to handle them successfully. In order to reach this goal, they should have large amount of knowledge and information about past events, which definitely seem to be useful due to face with trials and tribulations. Delving further into the issue reveals that not only can past event play a substantial role in every single facet of people's life but also helps them to be a great decision maker. In fact, day in day out crowds of people make an effort to reach the pinnacle of their life, which not unlit learn about their past can they flourish their life. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic, revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country; show that people who took advantages of past events had better performance in their daily life. Indeed, past events provide fertile ground for people to learn how to make a sound decision.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that history provides an opportunity for people learn about themselves and gives them national identity. Broadly speaking, vast majorities of people are curious about different phenomenal in the world. For example, who we are? Alternatively, where we come from? Considering much information in the history not only can answer those questions but also appeal people what happen in the history. To put it in other word, with thinking about previous event people can recognize crowds of phenomena. In addition, it provides fertile ground for people to learn about different culture and civilization or even art history, which play a pivotal role in national identity. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, improvement of technology provide an opportunity for people to live independently without thinking about previous events. Indeed, hardly ever can people progress with living based on past events. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, previous events play a key role in people's life. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that past events can provide an opportunity for people to face difficulties and make a sound decision. In addition, people can learn about national identity and become familiar with various culture and civilization. I highly suggest that people should always think about their past and learn about previous successful people. If they do not reverse such a trend, we will soon witness a situation, in which people do not have enough information about their culture and nationality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 683, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... history, hardly ever can they progress in future. In the following paragraph, I will pin...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228177641654 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.157733537519 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0918836140888 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0781010719755 0.046263068375 169% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0459418070444 0.0685040099705 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122511485452 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0367534456355 0.0351676179071 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87504934684 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0260336906585 0.0309702414327 84% => OK
Particles: 0.00153139356815 0.00188951952338 81% => OK
Determiners: 0.062787136294 0.0887237588012 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0260336906585 0.0209618222197 124% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0229709035222 0.0139019557991 165% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3642.0 2387.08602151 153% => OK
No of words: 586.0 408.028673835 144% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21501706485 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92010537223 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397610921502 0.338922669872 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278156996587 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203071672355 0.174417080927 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134812286689 0.112833075102 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87504934684 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491467576792 0.524397521467 94% => OK
Word variations: 60.3117568022 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6684587814 140% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2068965517 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.979370279 48.84282405 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.586206897 120.699889404 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2068965517 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.379310344828 0.644075263715 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 48.0225962104 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.375 1.45489161554 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285806853306 0.300154397459 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0890583734497 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0540793593802 0.0752933317313 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.40325373685 0.497263757937 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131946576325 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943582982148 0.114077575197 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485262353171 0.0781384742642 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.425444966112 0.336927656856 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0542093352277 0.067059652881 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208624843076 0.210909579961 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178517283683 0.0618886996521 29% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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