Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
In today's society, compared to earlier times, women are present in all fields which were earlier predominated by men. Today has largely become one of those times when a person identifies his/her interests, works towards it and achieves his ambitions irrespective of their inherent physicality.
To support this, we see a lot of successful male chefs in today's world such as Gordon Ramsay who has made his name in the US culinary world and is world famous, when cooking is essentially considered a female's domain and men are associated more with work that involves a lot of physical strength. It is hence incorrect to claim that men/women are not equally suited for a particular task.
In addition to this, we see women at great positions in the corporate world at CXO levels of many great companies. Sheryl Sandberg is the COO of Facebook; Indira Nooyi is the Pepsico CEO of India. Women are predominantly expected to take care of the house whereas men are expected to earn the bread for the family. But today there are situations where the females are the earners of the family and the males are the stay at home husbands. The society today, provides a plethora of options for the people in various different fields not restricting the options based on the physicality of the person.
However one might argue, that this scenario is different for a developing nation as compared to a developed country. In a developed country, where there are plentiful options available for people of both the gender, in a lot of developing countries there are households so poor that they can only afford the education of one amongst their three children. In such a scenario the parents would rather educate the male child of the family as compared to the female child because of the male earning stereotypes. Such situations would only become better when there is enough awareness for 'education to all' and people do not bias between the gender based on what they are inherently supposed to do.
It essentially depends on a person as to what he wants to do with his life because there are ample opportunities given today, for men and women equally. We see so many females who are in the army serving the nation and on the contrary, we see men who are working in female salons as hair stylists.
Therefore, to claim that a person might feel restricted in choosing a particular profession or a job because he is inherently not made for it is incorrect. Today people choose what best fits their goals and ambitions irrespective of the what inherently prevents them in doing so.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 203, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'females'' or 'female's'?
Suggestion: females'; female's
...hen cooking is essentially considered a females domain and men are associated more with...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'as to', 'in addition', 'such as', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248945147679 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0759493670886 0.0880659088768 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0548523206751 0.0497285424764 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0400843881857 0.0444667217837 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132911392405 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0506329113924 0.0406280797675 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66278250178 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0274261603376 0.030933414821 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107594936709 0.0997080785238 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0105485232068 0.0249443105267 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0295358649789 0.0148568991511 199% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2568.0 2732.02544248 94% => OK
No of words: 443.0 452.878318584 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79683972912 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338600451467 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252821670429 0.280924506359 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171557562077 0.200843997647 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119638826185 0.132149295362 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66278250178 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483069977427 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 54.0229324368 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0588235294 23.380412469 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5418330449 59.4972553346 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.058823529 141.124799967 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0588235294 23.380412469 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.674092028746 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 51.3409905723 51.4728631049 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.65322580645 1.64882698954 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263026742914 0.391690518653 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129617193417 0.123202303941 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0871136223768 0.077325440228 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.609572552027 0.547984918172 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122291416629 0.149214159877 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110910303018 0.161403998019 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05789507125 0.0892212321368 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.29751881094 0.385218514788 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.123814832686 0.0692045440612 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166751640867 0.275328986314 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386428103306 0.0653680567796 59% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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