Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
According to author higher authority from all field should abdicate after 5 years to revitalize any enterprise via new leadership is the direct path to success. Success to any enterprise depends on its policy and experience they gather through out the time. I disagree with author to a great extent, though author is partially right.
There is a proverb failure is the key to success, what is the insight of it? It means failure helps to measure the progress, failure ensures you are trying and closing to success. It helps you to figure out the problems and solve them. And this trying and failing is the experience. That proverb shows the importance of experience. Microsoft is one of the most successful tech company, which have grown under the shade of Bill Gates richest person in the world. He built Microsoft and nurture, it is his experience that helps Microsoft to grow through out thesse years. Apple is also grows under Steve Jobs, most importantly we all know what happened to apple when Steve Jobs get fired. Moreover, Facebook is latest addition to this group which is growing under Mark Zuckerberg.
"Experience is best teacher"-Adage. And how is it possible for anyone gain that experience if he/she has to step down from his/her position. It takes years to understand the employees, what makes them happy and what makes them sad.
In addition, great power comes with great responsibility and to be responsible it requires time, what is experience. New leadership may help the enterprise to find different view different policy but experience that comes only with time. Abdicating after 5 years while the person was in his peak would not it be a loss to the organization. The new successor has to start over and again needs time to reaquire knowledge to make the organization successful.
On the other hand, staying in power for a long period may lead to dictatorship and diminish democracy. Hitlar is the perfect example for that. He showcase the negative side of power and how bad can be dictatorship. Following him Hussain Muhammad Ershad also display a nefarious piece of dictatorship during his time as president of Bangladesh. Therefore, revitalization is necessary for any enterprise but with numerous consideration.
Finally, enterprise must not follow this abdicate after 5 years policy as its not surest path to success. Though, enterprise should look out for those who become autocratic with time, they need step down from power.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...n its policy and experience they gather through out the time. I disagree with author to a g...
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Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...experience that helps Microsoft to grow through out thesse years. Apple is also grows under...
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Line 3, column 708, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the latest'.
Suggestion: is the latest
...teve Jobs get fired. Moreover, Facebook is latest addition to this group which is growing...
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Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gains'.
Suggestion: gains
...dage. And how is it possible for anyone gain that experience if he/she has to step d...
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Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...the person was in his peak would not it be a loss to the organization. The new suc...
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Line 9, column 147, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'showcases'.
Suggestion: showcases
...lar is the perfect example for that. He showcase the negative side of power and how bad ...
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Line 11, column 79, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the surest'.
Suggestion: not the surest
...is abdicate after 5 years policy as its not surest path to success. Though, enterprise sho...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'as to', 'in addition', 'on the other hand', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253333333333 0.240241500013 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.171111111111 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0755555555556 0.0880659088768 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0311111111111 0.0497285424764 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0555555555556 0.0444667217837 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0977777777778 0.12292977631 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0266666666667 0.0406280797675 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78485288212 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0488888888889 0.030933414821 158% => OK
Particles: 0.00888888888889 0.0016655270985 534% => OK
Determiners: 0.08 0.0997080785238 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0155555555556 0.0249443105267 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0288888888889 0.0148568991511 194% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2465.0 2732.02544248 90% => OK
No of words: 409.0 452.878318584 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02689486553 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332518337408 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251833740831 0.280924506359 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19315403423 0.200843997647 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139364303178 0.132149295362 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78485288212 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 219.290929204 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542787286064 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 62.1441865217 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7307692308 23.380412469 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0925593823 59.4972553346 51% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8076923077 141.124799967 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7307692308 23.380412469 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.674092028746 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 40.9141433139 51.4728631049 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.46551724138 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337313141893 0.391690518653 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101172645416 0.123202303941 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0707165193371 0.077325440228 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.491336226626 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114268629749 0.149214159877 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105871641678 0.161403998019 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068669987687 0.0892212321368 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.255017618789 0.385218514788 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0865039036906 0.0692045440612 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201694659834 0.275328986314 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623202992265 0.0653680567796 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.4325221239 192% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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