Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good?
Progress plays an important role in any person's life. Progress means to grow or to develop or in other words, move towards a destination or a more advanced stage. Every human being by nature, need to be progressive because more progressiveness brings more success in life. In fact, it is a tool to measure one's success. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one in whether progress is always good. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that progress provide fertile ground for people to live easier and reach to their pinnacle of their life. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that there are myriads of trials and tribulations in daily life, which accompany people as an obstacle. Scientifically speaking, people all around the globe make an effort to make critical situation better and make the world better place to live. In fact, progress plays a pivotal role in this effort and hardly ever people can make a change without developments. Actually, in today's hectic world, not only can people benefits from progress in every single facet of their life but also can achieve their dreams in every field. Delving further into the issue reveals that nowadays life expectancy has increased and hardly people satisfy with low level of improvement. Indeed, crowds of people are willing to take advantages of progress because without which we cannot even imagine our life and world seems to be paralyzed. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country; show that people who lived in a society, which saturated with progress, lead a much healthier lifestyle because they provided with the best facilities. For example, development of medical branches or even technological advancements, as a result, cures too many diseases and so forth.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that not only can progress terminated into the easier life but also provide an opportunity for people to reach tertiary education. Broadly speaking, many societies suffer from illiteracy and lagging society. In fact, not until societies are progressed can people continue their education and reach to a higher education. To put it in other word, there is a correlation between knowledge and progress and hardly ever can people enhance their knowledge without progress. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, not only can progress be dangerous but also can brings many drawbacks. Sophisticated arms, explosives in the hands of terrorists and children, science of human cloning in the hands of scientist and so forth, are some of example that how progress can go wrong. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, progress will certainly make the world better place to live. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that progress will patronize people to live easier and provide an opportunity to handle trials and tribulations. In addition, progress provides fertile ground for people to improve their education and achieve to pinnacle of their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... life. In fact, it is a tool to measure ones success. Bearing this fact in mind a qu...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
... can progress be dangerous but also can brings many drawbacks. Sophisticated arms, exp...
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Line 7, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and achieve to pinnacle of their life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'as a result', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.153333333333 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.08 0.0866891130778 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.08 0.046263068375 173% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0333333333333 0.0685040099705 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.03 0.0351676179071 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87148288328 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0383333333333 0.0309702414327 124% => OK
Particles: 0.00166666666667 0.00188951952338 88% => OK
Determiners: 0.0783333333333 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0233333333333 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133333333333 0.0139019557991 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3361.0 2387.08602151 141% => OK
No of words: 541.0 408.028673835 133% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21256931608 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.408502772643 0.338922669872 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.301293900185 0.251872472559 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212569316081 0.174417080927 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136783733826 0.112833075102 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87148288328 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502772643253 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 60.6928825257 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8076923077 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1440085916 48.84282405 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.269230769 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8076923077 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 50.9370823262 45.7405998639 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.44375 1.45489161554 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137915167387 0.300154397459 46% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0888382330142 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0625022406022 0.0752933317313 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.428603356094 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126076741705 0.151897553556 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520894300347 0.114077575197 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569767260763 0.0781384742642 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.436722547203 0.336927656856 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.050856264176 0.067059652881 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107074457332 0.210909579961 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470621325208 0.0618886996521 76% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 18.0 8.42114695341 214% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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